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[Mechanic Artwork | Episode 1 - "Above The Border" [Extended Cut Remake]]

finally got around to watching this. I love the blending of art mediums! I also like the effort put into making the character move while talking, that's something I need to work on. I do think that most characters move in the first half of dialogue and then tend to stand still in the second half. Very cool editing effects and stop motion is always cool to see
Near the beginning I think some of the camera work was a bit raggedy.

VictoransXD responds:

Thank you so much for honest criticism ^^ I'll take all of it into consideration for Episode 2, i agree theres sometimes lack of movement in dialogue other than the faces in the episode aswell as the first scene being abit choppy, those issues will be fixed in future episodes aswell as work on more unique camera angles and smooth transitions :DD